AkhkharuZI's Reviews

[Monarch]

Solid Art - Mixed Message

I'll start off by saying the effort of animation, as well as choice of music make this a great flash from an artistic standpoint.

However, your message about fast food being deadly is somewhat skewed. Long term studies by various health organizations that have been released in 2006 show little/no connection between high fat (and even trans fat) containing foods and actual cardiovascular disease and cholesterol. In fact, reduction of fat intake often increases your risk by a sizable amount. While eating excessive amounts of food (including the home-cooked kind) is bad for you, this doesn't make fast food any worse than other foods for you.

If your curious, read up on some studies published in the Journal of the American Medical Association. especially some of the major, decade duration, studies released in Feb 06.

[Grand Theft Boner]

made me want to play vice city...

The sound and graphics were fairly good, but throughout the entire flash I kept waiting for a plot to develop... I thought it was going to turn into a parody of people doing what they see in vice city, but nothing like that really happened. (that's a good thing, but the flash still lacked plot)
it was a good memorial of a good game, but next time put some more thought into the storyline.

also, when showing the side view of the motorcycle/scooter the scooter had tail light trails, but the cycle didn't. (just a little incongruity there)

[Whitmore the Toad Pirate3]

Refreshing

I am glad to see material like this on newgrounds. Not only did you create an original animation, but there was something more.
I can't explain it except that it's something disturbing that has it's full effect because it's new... unlike other things that were once disturbing, that people have been desensitised to.

Also, supurb work on the sound.
keep being original

EdibleCastle responds:

um, thank, i think.

[demolition derby]

pretty fun

The game overall was pretty enjoyable, the idea of smashing up some other cars always be enjoyable at one point or another. (crowded parking lot, rush hour, etc) The only thing I found was that after hitting a car, there is a certain period of time, that you can hit another, and actually go through it, and end up with that car hitting you instead. just a minor bug, thought I'd let you know.
keep up the good work!

[Frank's Adventure]

my inner-pervert applauds you

that was a good game,
the right amount of puzzle to make it fun,
and of course, the goal being finding nude pics was cool too.
did you draw those yourself?
if so, good job

keep up the good work, make another!!!

[Fire Man - Incoming Storm]

good game, but fix the mistakes

the foreground in this game moved around waaay too much compared to the background.

also, enimies respawn the second you walk away from where you are standing, or even if you are standing where they were at too long.
this does not follow the style of the megaman games.

while killing a couple of bad guys like that is all good, having to kill a couple million isn't fun, it's boring.

you can make a great game, just keep up the good work, and keep peoples reviews in mind.

iragination responds:

You mean the clouds in the boss battle? I'll keep that in mind for further projects.